
Usual quality writing. Solid plot.
But nevertheless, I felt bored throughout the whole read. I can't help it.
All these descriptions of Roman being in spirit/astral state and wandering on laser beams or being in the dark panicking... Sigh. Too much, too uninteresting after having read it 10 times before. Tedious and boring.
Furthermore I couldn't connect neither to Xavier nor Roman.
The suspense part didn't grip me. To me it was just one long wait for Roman to be found. Sorry.